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Round three - smutmarathon 2019

So the assigned this time was to write 180-200 that consisted of 75% conversation between two people.

I wrote a very Australian piece this time which probably went against me a little bit but it was set in s small, coastal town and involved the guy from the bottle-o cracking on to the girl from the fish and chip place.

As much as I'd like to tear it apart and start over, here it is!

Round 3

The catch


"You guys shut early tonight, isn’t anybody buying fish and chips anymore?" 


“Stop needling. It’s too fucking hot”


She had just breezed into the shop, sweat dripping off her, hair stuck to her face and neck and her nipples prominent through her singlet. 


“I hope they're for me.”


“Stop it! Yeah it's quiet, everyone's heading to the beach at Sam’s. You should come but I suppose you've got to work" she retorts with a cheeky, pitying smile. 


“You just like me because I sell booze at low, low prices.” 


“Maybe.” She looked at me, her eyes betraying her. Those thick, hard nipples were for me.


“Hmmm, a party on a beach. If only I had someone I could hang out with…”


“I can think of someone.”


“Maybe I should get out of here early if everyone else is going?”


"Then who’d sell everyone in town their beer?"


“Cheeky seeing as I might want some chips when I finish. But fuck it, that grin tells me I'm going to the party.”


“Well, imagine if everyone just bailed on work to go party every time the whole town shuts down?”


“Then I'd be an idiot to feel any other way, wouldn't I?”




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